Pale Moon and Bright Stars

~ Pale moon and bright stars ~

 
  Though I wait for the sun
     it's the moonlight 
  that shines, on silhouettes'
     stealthy steps 'neath my sight

  The sun sleeps late
     in cool northern climes
  and when she deigns to ascend
     she's on borrowed time

  Pale moon and bright stars
     panoply of heaven's host
  her planets and angel-dust
     ~ at night do I toast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:45 AM
i love this...the sun needs to borrow more time from night...i like when they are equally balanced...your images are gorgeous my friend.... great poem :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for making my morning with such a nice comment, my friend. You are really too kind! :-) gw
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Nothing beats the night sky Gershon. especially where there's no light pollution. Tom
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Oh, such an important observation you've made, Tom. There's just nothing like the unfettered night sky out in the country! Smiles, Gershon
Green Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Beautifully done my friend. The sun is on borrowed time because the day are becoming shorter. I loved that
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Thank you for your kind words and especially for letting me know what you liked about the poem, Chris. Greatly appreciated! Cheers, Gershon
There Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:31 PM
A beauty, Gershon ~
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Thanks for the lift you've given me with just two words, HT! Best wishes, Gershon
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October 23, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Wow, this is simply beautiful, Gershon (I do like night beauty better)
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Aw, thank you so much for making MY evening with your lovely comment, my dear friend. Deeply appreciated, Michelle. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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