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poem submitted to "Deviants and Devine" poetry contest, Silent One, sponsor, July 31, 2026
PALE GEOMETRY
She walks into a room
and the light recalibrates~
not brighter,
just more attentive,
as though it has found
something it has been trying
to illuminate for years.
People don’t know how to label her.
Some say albino,
some say freak,
some say different,
some say rare,
a few say nothing at all
because language feels too clumsy
for someone who seems drafted
from the margin of the visible.
Her skin is a quiet astonishment,
a pale that isn’t absence
but a kind of presence~
the way frost is present,
the way moonlight is present,
the way silence can be present
when it’s listening.
Children stare at her
with the frankness adults have forgotten.
They see the shimmer first,
the soft divergence,
the way her hair catches daylight
like a handful of spun glass.
She has learned to move gently
through the world,
not to hide,
but because brightness
is a delicate thing,
and she carries it everywhere.
When she smiles,
the moment feels slightly rearranged~
as if the ordinary has stepped aside
to make room
for whatever she is.
Not divine,
not deviant,
not anything the old words claim~
pale geometry,
luminous,
in the way a rare phenomenon is luminous,
in the way a deviation
can become its own kind of truth.
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