Abdulhafeez Oyewole Poet Rhyme

Palatable and Charitable

__Attestation to our sweet dreams__

We can’t beef
We’re far from it
We can’t leave
We’re richer than that

We can apologize
When we’re wrong
We can publicize
When we’re strong

We’re not mad
We’re conscious of time
And so we’ll be heard
At exactly the time

We have depth in us
We dream of what is feasible
We’re wise and a brilliant source…
We’re meaningful and capable

All we have in our desires are real
And they are worth in our dreams
Medals and wordsmith meal
Are perhaps minimal in our rhythm?

We struggle in the battle
We lock horn that is realizable
Our visions abound- aren’t rattle  
They are palatable and charitable.

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Timothy Hicks June 13, 2013 at 12:32 AM Loved the title and your message... may you always see the value within you and in the others you pass by. Appreciate your visits earlier on several of my poems... much obliged!

Mustapha Mohammed June 7, 2013 at 9:29 AM I like both the rhythm and energy I feel in your poem bro..Nicely penned!

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2013 at 11:58 PM so I see this won a contest? Congrats to you. you sure have a way with words. Great message in this one.

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2013 at 10:25 PM Hi Abdulhafeez, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 17, 2013 at 6:14 AM Thanks for the placement.

Len Gasun June 5, 2013 at 5:04 AM This is so beautiful and inspirational poem my dear friend, AO. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm stopping by also to thank you for my win in your contest. It's my great honor. Thank you soo much! love and hugs, Leonora

Nette Onclaud June 4, 2013 at 4:30 PM much depth in this lovely work... you light the page with dreamy images.... make a wish!..:) huggs

Constance La France June 4, 2013 at 9:14 AM Abdul, wonderful words within your poem, great work and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your In Honour and Appreciation Contest, I am very honoured, constance