Pala

ablaze a sink of fire volcanic rouge raw maw, sole biter, coal mindful I walk, suspended upon pain passage gladly given Pala’s sister bleeds in birth rivulets mountain maker, latent womb spew man kind Poet: Debbie Guzzi Contest: View from a Vignette

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 5:05:00 PM

WAy to go, Debs. This reminds me of another one I think I saw you once write about volcanos. RAW MAW. Awesome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

Lady, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2012 8:16:00 PM

CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A FABULOUS WIN FOR A MAJESTIC VIGNETTE LUV .. ALWAYS GLORIOUS WORK ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2012 5:40:00 PM

Knew it was a winner..Congrats..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 11/9/2012 10:20:00 AM

Excellent take on the contest photo Debi!Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 8:06:00 AM

Another superb win Debbie, congratulations xx hope you are keeping warm xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 3:56:00 PM

awesome, you went volcanic with yours!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/5/2012 4:02:00 PM

What a phenomenal write. Soup mail coming... :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2012 6:28:00 PM

I would not wish to cross her. Powerful image.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/4/2012 7:21:00 AM

Imaginative...nice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2012 7:21:00 AM

I will have to check out that contest...Great work..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2012 4:59:00 PM

Gorgeous poem, Debbie! - Luck in contest - hugs / / Anne-Lise :)