Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

Pala

ablaze
a sink of fire
volcanic rouge
raw maw, sole biter, coal
mindful I walk, suspended 
upon pain

passage
gladly given
Pala’s sister
bleeds in birth rivulets
mountain maker, latent womb
spew man kind



Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: View from a Vignette

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Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2012 at 5:05 PM WAy to go, Debs. This reminds me of another one I think I saw you once write about volcanos. RAW MAW. Awesome.

Poet Destroyer A November 11, 2012 at 10:56 AM Lady, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2012 at 8:16 PM CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A FABULOUS WIN FOR A MAJESTIC VIGNETTE LUV .. ALWAYS GLORIOUS WORK ..

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2012 at 5:40 PM Knew it was a winner..Congrats..Sara

Kash Poet November 9, 2012 at 10:20 AM Excellent take on the contest photo Debi!Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 9, 2012 at 8:06 AM Another superb win Debbie, congratulations xx hope you are keeping warm xx

Carol Sunshine Brown November 9, 2012 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2012 at 3:56 PM awesome, you went volcanic with yours!!

Cyndi Macmillan November 5, 2012 at 4:02 PM What a phenomenal write. Soup mail coming... :)

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 6:28 PM I would not wish to cross her. Powerful image.

James Marshall Goff November 4, 2012 at 7:21 AM Imaginative...nice

Sara Kendrick November 4, 2012 at 7:21 AM I will have to check out that contest...Great work..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2012 at 4:59 PM Gorgeous poem, Debbie! - Luck in contest - hugs / / Anne-Lise :)