Paintings of Love - Above

Cozy crimson sky highlighted
Clouds, in corners, gold ignited
Cranes and cuckoos fly exited

Wherefrom is this ringdove?

Compassion in thoughts, words, and deeds
Complying with kind nature's needs
Cosmos cultivates complex seeds...

Is there, midst, a foxglove?

Calmness carves the clandestine cores
Cardinals commence carefree tours
Calcites and corals hug in scores

Cool breeze is on the move
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Emate Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:43 PM
This is so beautiful, Christuraj. I love stanza 3 the most. Well done. A well-deserved win.
Agustin Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 9:06 PM
Wow! Congrats.... Thanks for sharing your talent, evident in this muse of yours. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Poteet Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:53 PM
I commend your alliteration - well done, Christaraj - Congratulations on your entry, a fine one, indeed.
Alex Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful images and alliteration, Christuraj! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Rose  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:14 PM
And the winds of fame are on your side dear poet, Bavo! well done , congrats dear Christuraj
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:03 AM
A huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, appealing poem, Christuraj. Janice
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Compassion in thoughts, words, and deeds..lovely poem, congratulations on your top win.
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Chris, a lovely write with great alliteration. Congrats on your top win! Charlie
Alex Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity. May God Bless You!
Ashley Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Dear Christuraj, your verse paints Nature so beautifully within the frame of a wonderful rhyme scheme, strings of lovely alliteration and amazing imagery! Expressive appreciation shines in the golden flow of your ardent pen. A superb poetic offering! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Alex Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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