Painting Life

Painting life 

Trapped and bound inside his majesty castle 
Brightly shown need of purify 
Not in the sake one glory 
Extracting life out of misery 
Tranquility unto turmoil souls 
Unveil true identity 
infinite ability 


Remedy for unseen wound 
Lonely path 
god and statues 

journey of one soul 
Passage of mystic and unknown 
Reconstruct …. 
Unseen wound 

Saint and sinner 
Bless yet doom 
Cost of nature 
Necessity to sacrifice 
On every path of life 

Blesses souls who tasted life…

May 6 09
(if its a poem then am dreamin )
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:25:00 AM
This is wonderful, Isa. I liked this a lot. Left me ponder about life.
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:48:00 PM
Well done in the contest,,late congratulations. Enjoyed your poem,, you have much to express,..p.d.
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Date: 10/23/2009 8:39:00 AM
Beautifully poised indeed. I truly enjoyed reading it. All the best.
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Isa. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:05:00 AM
Nice one, i like it. Keep it up. And by the way thanks for the commen
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Date: 10/8/2009 6:54:00 PM
Thank you carolyn and Sara would love to explore is there any discusion forum here or being friend to discuss and interact with poets ? i need to learn more pls inform me :)
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:59:00 AM
The power of this journey gave me chills, Isa. How else could one paint life. It is a lonely journey for saints and sinners alike. Beautiful writing! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:57:00 AM
Really like the last stanza. Nicely done. Welcome to soup. You have soup mail. Sara
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