Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Painting a Pastoral Morn

cotton candy swirls
dabbed onto an azure sky. . . 
sweet brushstrokes of dawn

through green velvet fields
a country lane meanders. . .
dew paints the lilacs

where the dirt lane ends
leafy trees shade a cottage. . . 
fawns serenely pose


For Gail Doyle's A Scenery Of Your Choice As An Artist Poetry Contest
Used now for 'EARLY SEPTEMBER PREMIERE CONTEST any form,any theme,max of 25 lines' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Janice Canerdy September 4, 2017 at 11:35 PM Such a beautiful scene you've painted, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice

Janice Canerdy September 4, 2017 at 11:35 PM Such a beautiful scene you've painted, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice

Skat A May 16, 2015 at 11:27 AM splendid morn

Harry Horsman September 8, 2012 at 5:05 AM This sure is a picture in words, each stroke a word of sheer poetic grace, a bit like you really.

Len Gasun September 5, 2012 at 11:01 AM I love this one, Andrea! Thank you so much for sharing, reading again on my Namagyan Beach poem and most especially, HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! Nikko's poem informed me. May you have all the happiness and blessings that life ever hold! May God bless you and your family always!!!

Tanya Harrington July 24, 2012 at 12:56 PM Wow, I love this! Congrats, I'm getting around late to reading some! :) Tanya

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 21, 2012 at 8:49 AM Waht a beautiful image you created, Andrea! Congrats on your win. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 2:53 PM Very descriptive and expressive winning work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara

Joseph May July 19, 2012 at 1:04 PM congrats on your win Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2012 at 12:34 PM congrats Andrea on a glorious win for this amazing write and splendid scenery painted with lovely words luv..

Kim Merryman July 18, 2012 at 6:37 PM A beautiful picture, Andrea! I love the "cotton candy swirls". Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Deborah Burch July 18, 2012 at 2:43 PM Big Congrats Andrea on your win with this lovely tribute to Kinkaid's work!!! how we shall all miss his inspiration...Well Done!!! love ya, deb

Joyce Johnson July 18, 2012 at 12:54 PM Prettily painted, Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams July 18, 2012 at 10:56 AM Andrea congrats on your win, an excellent picture..David

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 9:28 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley July 15, 2012 at 8:42 AM Such wonderful things for my mind to look at; all that brings contentment and a feeling that all is well.

Gwendolen Song July 13, 2012 at 2:32 PM Had to revisit this one to pick it apart more bc of its beauty..Your paintbrush swirled and dabbed gorgeous images...I can smell the cotton candy as well as the lilacs...maybe I will just scare the deer away and go right into this cottage. :) gwendolen

Gwendolen Song July 13, 2012 at 6:49 AM OOOOhhhh,,,,so serine, Andrea...Kinkaid-like in its beauty...Best of luck in this exciting contest...can't wait to see the winners' list...this was a superb contest idea...luv, gwendolen

Painted Hunter July 12, 2012 at 6:06 AM Beautiful scene, Andrea. By the way, the raccoon eventually jumped out and we swam out and got our boat...haha

Phyllis Babcock July 11, 2012 at 8:04 PM Another nice series of haiku. Nothing like scenery to enjoy nature's wonders. Have a good trip and drive safe. love phyl

Deborah Burch July 10, 2012 at 9:15 PM omg!! Andrea, this is fab!!! well done hun!! winnning wishes for you!! love it dearly!! deb

Black Eyed Susan July 10, 2012 at 7:13 AM nice imagery :) good luck in the contest!

Joann Grisetti July 9, 2012 at 7:39 PM A beautiful pastoral scene for Gail. I am sure she will love this poem.

Robert Johnson July 9, 2012 at 3:13 PM Your vision shines into my soul with pastel scenery. With magic sky's that paint the eyes on earthly greenery. A passive glance into a world beyond an average day. Reminding us that when we look, we now know why we pray.

Matthew Anish July 9, 2012 at 2:13 PM Fantatic images in this work. Reminds me of the Burl Ives tune, "The Big Rock Candy Mountain". Peace & Love Matthew Anish

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