Painting

As I reclined and looked at the horizon
I complemented myself with a proving smile
because the sunset was so lovely
and I had not seen one like it for quite sometime
The omnibus colors of the sky blended so perfectly
Magnified by the tilting shadows of the glaring sun
and before it had finally rested
I felt my life painting is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 20, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Great poem...especially since I love painting myself
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