Painted Sunset

Fireball descends.
Sunlight imprints brilliant hues.
The firmament glows.

© November 7, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  SUNSET (( HAIKU )) 	
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer ~ A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on an exciting win with this vivid and breathtaking Haiku luv..
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 2:00 AM
Thank you for your always kind comments. (I might not get on PS that often, but I still think of your son...and his safety from time to time...and pray. I hope he is well.)
Fisher Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Dane Anne - a wonderful piece as always and so deserving of its contest win - luv Janette
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Thank you. Smiles.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:45 AM
Awesome write! sioiunds like awinner to me! good luck in the contest!!! ----Lori
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Thank you. It made the top 10!
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Thank you. Smiles.
Mitchell Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:13 AM
Beautiful!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Thank you. Smiles.
Williams Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 1:44 AM
Dane Ann congrats on your great win..David
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Thank you. Smiles.
A   Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:03 PM
DANE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for the challenge and for including me in the top 10. Big Smiles!
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