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Painted Sunset

Fireball descends. Sunlight imprints brilliant hues. The firmament glows. © November 7, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: SUNSET (( HAIKU )) Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer ~ A

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2011 6:47:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on an exciting win with this vivid and breathtaking Haiku luv..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/9/2011 2:00:00 AM

Thank you for your always kind comments. (I might not get on PS that often, but I still think of your son...and his safety from time to time...and pray. I hope he is well.)

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/8/2011 11:51:00 AM

Dane Anne - a wonderful piece as always and so deserving of its contest win - luv Janette

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:42:00 PM

Thank you. Smiles.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/8/2011 7:45:00 AM

Awesome write! sioiunds like awinner to me! good luck in the contest!!! ----Lori

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:42:00 PM

Thank you. It made the top 10!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2011 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:43:00 PM

Thank you. Smiles.

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 11/8/2011 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:43:00 PM

Thank you. Smiles.

David Williams

Date: 11/8/2011 1:44:00 AM

Dane Ann congrats on your great win..David

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:43:00 PM

Thank you. Smiles.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:03:00 PM

DANE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for the challenge and for including me in the top 10. Big Smiles!