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Painted Shadows

brown and orange hues, branches painting shadows over the tree stumps with a boisterous wind a mesmerizing dance ensues birds tweeting away mating ritual displayed the first signs of fall accompanied by the sounds reflecting the changing times...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/19/2010 6:15:00 AM
I am intrigued by your write. Hope I don't bore you ... I am not made to be superficial. Something about your words hanker for the celestial.
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:11:00 AM
wonderful picture of autumn you paint here-- my why can't you lend me that pen now?? haha I am such a pest-- but I have to be one since you sure are writing such beauties -- & I really like your title for this too-- somebody's inspired :) really enjoyed this beautiful tanka :) -- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Wilma. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2010 11:17:00 PM
SEems like another tanka is wanting to be created underneath the last one here! VEry nice, Wilma. Glad to see a new post from you nearly every day here. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 11/4/2010 4:06:00 PM
Wilma, your poems ease my pain they have such a tranquil peacful feel to them. Love you girl
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Date: 11/4/2010 3:39:00 PM
Quite lovely Wilma and such dapper lines of visuality ... great reference to the shadows ... seems exotic to my read and luv it dear friend..
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Date: 11/4/2010 2:47:00 PM
Excellent Poetry my missed Partner in Crime...love your way always Michael
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Date: 11/4/2010 2:14:00 PM
trees have glory too. john
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Date: 11/4/2010 8:33:00 AM
beauty painted today!
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:38:00 AM
What a delightful scene of the wind rushing through the trees and birds engaging in mating as the seasons change, Wilma! Excellent double tanka, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:19:00 AM
Nice picture of the autumn or fall you have painted so well with apt images, Wilma
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