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Painted Lady

The moment i saw her
Adorned in ink
Perfection of shape
No tattooist did blink
 
Designs of many
Etched on skin
Shoulders, thighs
A personal thing
 
Creative art
By a steady hand
This human picture
Beautifully grand
 
Gothic work
Drawn in place
Artistically scribed
In it's female grace
 
To view this view
Copy my link
As you will see why
No tattooist did blink
 
 
http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life2.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/14/2009 10:18:00 AM

Loved the images I got in this one I could see a willowy dark eyed beauty with indigo Ink all over her dont ask me why ... lol I just did ... btw thanks for the suggestion for the title of the poem I do struggle naming mine LOL I did say I was new right ? tc Love Jayne x x

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/9/2009 2:03:00 PM

James, The rhyme and images that you have created here in words is lovely. I followed the link. SURPRISE!!! I avoid nudity, by choice, even in it's most artistic form. I prefer limit my exposure to nudity to personal and private intamacy and not imprint my mind with random nudes. (Even if it is artistically handled.) I guess I better stay inside the protective environment of Poetry Soup if I don't want surprises. (NOT passing judgment. It's just a personal preference.) Lovingly, Dane

Shirin Neshat

Date: 7/8/2009 2:06:00 PM

Nicely done.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/8/2009 12:18:00 PM

Gothic work-so another James with a greek woman in mind,is she Aphrodite the godess of beauty love and fertility?thats a picture i get--a young curvy beautiful mediterranean greek woman offering love and passion-beautiful painting of a lady-great artist--great write my friend-charma

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/8/2009 12:00:00 PM

You always flow so elegantly and gracefully down the page my friend, this is wonderfully creative!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2009 4:31:00 AM

James, I love reading all your poetry. I do not have to go see a link I see it in the way you write. Outstanding my friend. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2009 3:00:00 PM

Love the rhyme. Very creative. Sara