Painted Fire

Chilled by crisp air
Warmed by nature’s painted
Fire in the fall sky



Inspired by Brian's fall haiku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 18, 2009 at 9:03 PM
Visual haiku, Krista, and so vivid in expression.. u could almost feel the crisp air ... and see the fire in the fall sky... enjoyed .. and thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry tonight... with blessings... luv... appreciate your reading them... Linda-Marie..
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September 30, 2009 at 5:33 AM
Thank you for your kind words today Krista.Rgds Brian
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September 18, 2009 at 12:49 PM
this is the image you get in the morning and at sun set.... magical moments!
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September 4, 2009 at 3:24 PM
I really like the last line in this one. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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August 25, 2009 at 7:47 PM
Various sensations in the name of Fall. Beautiful Haiku, Krista. Thank you for your comment on my "Casino". Love and be healthy, Iolanda
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August 25, 2009 at 6:11 PM
love the vision! Krista! jimbo
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August 25, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Just beautiful Kirsta>>James
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August 25, 2009 at 2:15 PM
Nicely describing fall. Keep writing. Sara
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