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Paint With Fire

Pouring lava into a cauldron Atop the highest mountain In the light of day and Not resting till the end of day To paint the sky scarlet; With passion in my heart I venture out at the break of day To accomplish a task of Herculean proportion: Flames splashed across the sky In a panoramic display of Red, yellow and orange with Ethereal grace and beauty! ~Best short Acrostic contest by Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 4:28:00 PM
Abdul :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Very descriptive and expressive work..Sara
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this poem Abdul,well done.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/21/2014 10:16:00 AM
Hey, haven't seen you in a while! Glad you liked my poem. Thanks.
Date: 7/18/2014 8:07:00 PM
Nicely painted! With passion in my heart... that was a great stanza. lots of great images. Well done on your winner :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/21/2014 10:15:00 AM
Without passion life is dull. I burned my fingers a few times when I am playing with fire!! Glad you liked it. Thanks
Date: 7/18/2014 2:27:00 PM
lovely win Abdul...PD
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 7/18/2014 1:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Hugs Verlena
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Verlena. Thanks a lot.
Date: 7/18/2014 1:14:00 PM
Well done Abdul... Well done... Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/18/2014 1:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
Date: 7/18/2014 8:37:00 AM
Fabulous imagery, Abdul. Congratulations on a wonderful win.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:34:00 PM
Hey, glad you liked it. Thanks.
Date: 7/18/2014 8:26:00 AM
You are an excellent painter, congratulations.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:33:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Glad you liked it.
Date: 7/18/2014 6:58:00 AM
You painted a beauty with words...congrats . BG
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Barbara.
Date: 7/18/2014 6:28:00 AM
Abdul, you have painted a masterpiece, my friend.. Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Arlene, thanks a lot.
Date: 7/18/2014 12:34:00 AM
Exclusive write Abdul,, loved this one,, congrats on big win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thanks much.
Date: 7/17/2014 11:24:00 PM
Abdul, I hope this one will now be read and commented on by other poets because it is a gorgeous example of personification, which I highly admire seeing in a poem! Congrats on your number two win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/18/2014 5:27:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks

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