Paint By Numbers

Attempted paint by numbers, but it cheats with letters
that mix in unexplainable hues, distorting, desecrating -
I’m complaining. Not at all lavender in the sky, but peach.
It bobs at eye-level. I try to slather it
with a more acceptable color, then swim underwater.
That color, likewise betrays, lies, cannot sway
me to keep this set of paints nor its decrepit cardboard.
So I have no idea how to paint with instructions - it ain’t 
but a distraction, a muse gone wrong - brush doesn’t belong
in my hand. Perhaps I will pull yarn through a loom
and let a flower or such bloom; or poesy a catastrophe…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 1:47 AM
I see no reason for changing any colour. And it can be fun too. Blessings and hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 5:50 AM
The colors were awful, didn’t match the picture!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 7:40 PM
'or poesy a catastrophe' -- I sniff something highly Freudian in those words, Kim! Oooooo. ~ Deep in the Subconscious
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:19 PM
LOL! Thanks for the laugh! :)
Situation Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 7:23 PM
I did that as a kid. I think you lack patience. but i did see some rhyming in this piece and that is what keeps it intresting.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:20 PM
I need a kit that has all the colors already mixed.
Hind Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Very amazing and it rings true, Kim! The whole poem was excellent.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Thank you, Paige!
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