Paint

Let the moon be our friend Let us smile at noon And when the rainbow color blooms Let us be painters with brushes Lining its line of colors A shade brighter here A shade brighter there Let us paint with the moon Let us paint together Brightly and smiling Let us paint You and I…

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:10:00 AM

Adeoye, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 4:52:00 PM

hello Adeoye, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing ...skat

Oluwatomisin Oyegoke

Date: 11/5/2012 2:29:00 AM

Nice, this is very very nice, the uncaring moon, the dreamy painter, the creation of a good thing

Oluwatomisin Oyegoke

Date: 9/5/2012 4:58:00 AM

Wow, Ku ise ooo. Well done, this a a true metaphysically romantic poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 5:12:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Adeoye. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol