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Pain's Torturous Fate

Conquest by everything dark and dismal Fortress of the deep runs black and deadly Horrors brought to the surface burns Try to hide behind the churning blanket The dark hole bleeds with endless souls And corrupted bleak pained hated eyes Terrify even the most glorious heroes Maybe hell would be a vacation from this fate Horrid pains plague the hearts of the wary Torture leads those lost to the gates of destruction Never will I tarry anywhere near terror Maybe someday I’ll get out of this fiery death Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2011 10:51:00 PM
This is great Russel....very expressive.... you painted a vivid picture.... thanks for sharing......smiles.....chiquita.
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:47:00 PM
Very expressive work that you have penned in this one..Reads like some bad times in your life or just a topic..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:50:00 AM
A lot of pain in this verse, hope none of it has touched you.
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Date: 8/12/2011 4:03:00 AM
cutting the poetic wrist and painting a scene so searing yet beautiful in concept, russel.. i bow!.. lovely! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:37:00 PM
intense and dramatic words Russell.. an excellent title befitting the contents of this creative write.. my youngest son of five is in the military in Libya right now.. he is my hero..luv..
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:17:00 PM
Pain can be torture but I must say that Hell takes the cake. Very vivid descriptions, Russell. You sketched horror effectively with the dark hole bleeds with endless souls....I would recommend u take a look at Wiese's book, 23 Minutes in Hell. Torture in hell is VERY REAL. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Take care, Gwendolen
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