Painfully Delicious

Your touch upon my soft cream skin 
As I lay here in this gentle breeze 
My blood starts flowing, warming inside 
Oh, ....you are such a little tease 
Tiny little touches, you creep along my flesh 
Seeking, searching the perfect place to rest 
You move with speed I envy, skill of a hunter. 
Quiet in the moment, you do what you do best 
You enter me with skill and grace 
A sensation that will last the night 
I feel you throughout my veins 
Sucking in my juices with your bite 
When the pain comes, my reaction is violent 
The itch of you I just can't help but wish away. 
You are welting up my soft cream skin 
Please, take your bloody kisses, leave me today. 

As many times before you have tasted me and I let you go. 
I will not let you live for one more drop, I kill you tiny mosquito
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 7:46 PM
I keep reading it and it still makes me chuckle at the end. Might I add, just because I am itchy real bad. I HATE MOSQUITOES and there are a ton of them out already this year!
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:35 PM
WOW I loved this from start to finish.Such a clever write that I thought was leading in one direction .... and then the sting in the tail. hugs as ever Jan xxxx
Smith Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Thanks Jan..lol...Quite the sting in the tail...hugs Tim
Devereau Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Wow...you had me enthralled up to the very end...lol love this poem...Noelle
Smith Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Noelle...It was a tease...Tim
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