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Painfully Delicious

Your touch upon my soft cream skin As I lay here in this gentle breeze My blood starts flowing, warming inside Oh, ....you are such a little tease Tiny little touches, you creep along my flesh Seeking, searching the perfect place to rest You move with speed I envy, skill of a hunter. Quiet in the moment, you do what you do best You enter me with skill and grace A sensation that will last the night I feel you throughout my veins Sucking in my juices with your bite When the pain comes, my reaction is violent The itch of you I just can't help but wish away. You are welting up my soft cream skin Please, take your bloody kisses, leave me today. As many times before you have tasted me and I let you go. I will not let you live for one more drop, I kill you tiny mosquito

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Date: 5/28/2014 7:46:00 PM
I keep reading it and it still makes me chuckle at the end. Might I add, just because I am itchy real bad. I HATE MOSQUITOES and there are a ton of them out already this year!
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:35:00 PM
WOW I loved this from start to finish.Such a clever write that I thought was leading in one direction .... and then the sting in the tail. hugs as ever Jan xxxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/28/2014 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Jan..lol...Quite the sting in the tail...hugs Tim
Date: 5/28/2014 4:25:00 PM
Wow...you had me enthralled up to the very end...lol love this poem...Noelle
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/28/2014 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Noelle...It was a tease...Tim

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