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Painful Tears

These tears.. oozing from the heart rind, Condense in the iris, become transparent Then shine like pearls. These, the tears of the subdued, are enough to distort our existence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/14/2014 12:13:00 AM
This is very good, powerful imagery
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:45:00 PM
salam fatima I really like ur poems , and I admire ur manner of writing as well :) hope u all the best inchallah
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 1/13/2014 5:53:00 PM
Thank you dear Hafssa Aj. That's make me happy.wish you the same.
Date: 1/13/2014 2:34:00 PM
you have a brilliant way of expressing poetry, Fatima..I admire you!! :))
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 1/13/2014 5:51:00 PM
Aiyah Broken D. thank you so much for the nice comment.

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