Painful Tears

These tears..
oozing from the heart rind, 
Condense in the iris,
become transparent
Then shine like pearls.
These, the tears of the subdued,
are enough to distort our existence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 12:13 AM
This is very good, powerful imagery
Aj Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:45 PM
salam fatima I really like ur poems , and I admire ur manner of writing as well :) hope u all the best inchallah
Nusairat Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Thank you dear Hafssa Aj. That's make me happy.wish you the same.
Torres Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:34 PM
you have a brilliant way of expressing poetry, Fatima..I admire you!! :))
Nusairat Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Aiyah Broken D. thank you so much for the nice comment.
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