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Painful Love

My feelings are so strong Yet I've always done something wrong I've fallen in love once again Yet forbidden from ever touching her skin There's no longer a point in moving on The lyrics will change but it'll still be the same song Another one sided mirror of emotions And no way to put love in motion I believe there's other fish in the sea Great and beautiful mermaids of the deep Yet, my rod must be broken So many years and yet to reel one in Love for me is a virus and i have no immunity It has me sitting and hoping for opportunities The chance to be that perfect one And until then i sit here, fishing under a burning sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 10:00:00 PM
Your love will come in, sometimes we have to stop looking for it to come, ask the universe, your rod isn't broken your mermaid she swims & in time you will be reeling her inn, great beautiful write William :)
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William Hughes
Date: 7/19/2012 2:17:00 AM
Thanks. stop looking? i will give that a try.
Date: 7/15/2012 11:10:00 PM
nice write
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William Hughes
Date: 7/17/2012 10:19:00 AM
thank you for reading and commenting
Date: 7/15/2012 10:57:00 PM
I have been there...searching for the one....very well written! Thank-you for sharing!~Tammy~
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William Hughes
Date: 7/17/2012 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for reading. =)

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