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Painful Goodbyes

Painful Goodbyes I want to stay with you but trust me when I say I have to go. I don't want to leave but my time is over and we can't go on. I always will love you though your tore my heart in two I can't find what possibly went wrong but i have to accept that now you are gone. No more sweet, soft, good night lullibies cause now we are exchanging painful goodbyes.

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Michael Reaves

Date: 4/1/2010 11:37:00 AM

Very impressive!!! Nice work!!! It's never easy to lose a love whether it's a relationsionship or a friendship!!! Broken hearts are hard to mend and I would like to start a friendship with you!!!

Brittany Moon

Date: 3/19/2010 9:04:00 AM

yeah, its always hard to say goodbye, whether its a friend or someone you love, especially if its someone you love...good write and keep the pen fill with ink...God Bless you...-Brittany-

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/18/2010 11:15:00 AM

Tough but proper decision. Will pay off in the long run. One has to do what one has to do.

Gabrielle Clemens

Date: 3/8/2010 11:54:00 AM

again, another beautiful write, when i read this poem, you wrote it so we could feel the emotions in it, they are very strong and meaningful. wonderful!

Amy Calico

Date: 3/3/2010 10:50:00 AM

i really like this. it's great

Adrian Torbenson

Date: 3/3/2010 10:46:00 AM

very sad it is full of emotion very good

Emily Rakis

Date: 3/2/2010 11:19:00 AM

Ahhh, this is just like the hospital when i went to see him and we saw each other for 2 seconds and said bye in ourpoetic way:'(. This is So Emotional and true it is just wonderful and heart touching to most girls and women

Courtney Hallett

Date: 2/18/2010 11:10:00 AM

Sad. I like it. Good job. Keep writing!!! -Courtney-

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/17/2010 11:19:00 AM

wow this is so good brittany, it's the feelings that you convey to your readers that is the best, and the last four lines are perfect! this is great and you have the power to make people feel with your writting so keep it up. =)jo

Susan Palli

Date: 2/14/2010 9:28:00 AM

well written

I<3zach Sessler

Date: 2/12/2010 9:11:00 AM

sad but i like it britt