The Melody Sings Poet Free verse

Painful Goodbyes

Painful Goodbyes

I want to stay with you

but trust me when I say I have to go.

I don't want to leave but my time is over

and we can't go on.

I always will love you

though your tore my heart in two

I can't find what possibly went wrong

but i have to accept that now you are gone.

No more sweet, soft, good night lullibies

cause now we are exchanging painful goodbyes.

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Michael Reaves April 1, 2010 at 11:37 AM Very impressive!!! Nice work!!! It's never easy to lose a love whether it's a relationsionship or a friendship!!! Broken hearts are hard to mend and I would like to start a friendship with you!!!

Brittany Moon March 19, 2010 at 9:04 AM yeah, its always hard to say goodbye, whether its a friend or someone you love, especially if its someone you love...good write and keep the pen fill with ink...God Bless you...-Brittany-

Ralph Taylor March 18, 2010 at 11:15 AM Tough but proper decision. Will pay off in the long run. One has to do what one has to do.

Gabrielle Clemens March 8, 2010 at 11:54 AM again, another beautiful write, when i read this poem, you wrote it so we could feel the emotions in it, they are very strong and meaningful. wonderful!

Amy Calico March 3, 2010 at 10:50 AM i really like this. it's great

Adrian Torbenson March 3, 2010 at 10:46 AM very sad it is full of emotion very good

Emily Rakis March 2, 2010 at 11:19 AM Ahhh, this is just like the hospital when i went to see him and we saw each other for 2 seconds and said bye in ourpoetic way:'(. This is So Emotional and true it is just wonderful and heart touching to most girls and women

Courtney Hallett February 18, 2010 at 11:10 AM Sad. I like it. Good job. Keep writing!!! -Courtney-

Joanna Smith February 17, 2010 at 11:19 AM wow this is so good brittany, it's the feelings that you convey to your readers that is the best, and the last four lines are perfect! this is great and you have the power to make people feel with your writting so keep it up. =)jo

Susan Palli February 14, 2010 at 9:28 AM well written

I<3zach Sessler February 12, 2010 at 9:11 AM sad but i like it britt

Carol Sunshine Brown February 8, 2010 at 3:48 PM I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Brittany. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2010 at 1:53 PM Sad write when love goes bad. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jay Loveless February 8, 2010 at 11:37 AM beautiful and one of my favorites. thank you so much for sharing it. xo rain