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Painful Exists

My mouth is dry with This suffocating air. My dreams have turned into What I have least expected. These braclets cover the scars Of what I used to feel. With the sheerness of Doubts that are in my mind. I have no more thoughts Left of you in my head. There is nothing left For me to give. I will soon be leaving These Painful Exists...

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/6/2009 5:24:00 AM

"There is nothing left for me to give"! You were gifted with poesy Alexz! A concrete form, of the sun,..the brightness of the moon, an old lover who only said once,..I love you,..ect. ect. ect. ! Poets love to see the smiles!,..not only the spit that turned to glue. I admire your write here,..unafraid to share,...write on Alexz! and ty for your kind comment. james

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/5/2009 7:36:00 PM

You are the creation of God. He does not make mistakes. Ever.-AA

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/5/2009 7:23:00 PM

...As beautiful as this is i greatly hope that you wont leave.

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/5/2009 7:08:00 PM

life is very hard the only way we could achieve it is to set our goals, have hope and be very strong. I like the description is very strong.