Painful Exists

My mouth is dry with
This suffocating air.

My dreams have turned into
What I have least expected.

These braclets cover the scars
Of what I used to feel.

With the sheerness of
Doubts that are in my mind.

I have no more thoughts
Left of you in my head.

There is nothing left
For me to give.

I will soon be leaving
These Painful Exists...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 5:24 AM
"There is nothing left for me to give"! You were gifted with poesy Alexz! A concrete form, of the sun,..the brightness of the moon, an old lover who only said once,..I love you,..ect. ect. ect. ! Poets love to see the smiles!,..not only the spit that turned to glue. I admire your write here,..unafraid to share,...write on Alexz! and ty for your kind comment. james
Hudson Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 7:36 PM
You are the creation of God. He does not make mistakes. Ever.-AA
Loveless Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 7:23 PM
...As beautiful as this is i greatly hope that you wont leave.
Neshat Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 7:08 PM
life is very hard the only way we could achieve it is to set our goals, have hope and be very strong. I like the description is very strong.
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