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8/7/2026 for The Beautiful Impossible Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet 

Painful Changes

"Young serpent", an aged father snake 
said as he kindly and wisely spake. 
"You must be comfortable in your skin.
It's the home that you'll be living in."

The young one grew.  Life was like a hug. 
His skin felt comfortable and snug, 
but as time went by, it got too tight.
Life was unbearable, try as he might. 

So, it came about that hardship and strife,
were conditions that motivate new life,
leading to a pleasant new existence,
as he shed his skin, and his resistance, 

and thought to himself, "It sure is strange.  
Difficulties can lead to change", 
and found in life that growing pain
often leads to happiness again.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your  win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Painful Changes" write. Great Ending. Yes, change can be hard but sometimes needed. Have a fun day with your wonderful win...............
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:07 AM
I am not so good with changes, and it is painful, but i think we learned through life, the only constant we hve is change. I like the way you started and ended the poem and your diction here is profound! A very meaningful and moving poem dear David Sending you light always 🦋💫
Crandall Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Ink. Yep, I'm similar. If I was a snake I would stay in my too tight skin until I popped out of it.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 1:17 AM
So we learn that change isnt impossible.❤️
Crandall Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:26 PM
I guess most of us have a resistance to change, right?
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