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Pain With No Gain

They all took a piece 
Never asked 
Never cared 
Just take take and take 

They took a piece of her today too 
This one was more to the right 
A bigger size 

They all take pieces 
Eventually there will be no more 
they’ll move to another part
Until there’ll be no more of her 

She wasn’t awful or dreadful 
Only misfortunate 
So there I saw her with missing pieces 

There I saw her 
I saw her cry

He took another piece 
A new kind of piece 
No longer hers, now

Everyone is taking a piece 
She’ll soon be left with none 

There goes one 
Follows another 

Piece by piece 
She’s not herself 

Piece by piece 
Why won’t they stop 

Piece by piece 
No one would help
He didn’t 
She couldn’t 
They wouldn’t 

There she was lost and cold 
Maybe that dusty book on the shelf can
Maybe He can 

Piece by piece 
She read through it

She laid it down 
A little peace 
A lot of guilt 

A good book but maybe another time
There’s no help for her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/27/2020 4:23:00 AM
Like taking each petal from a flower one by one, until it is no longer a flower but; when it is time, He will make her shine . . . : )
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Date: 1/13/2020 10:00:00 AM
Wow, this piece got me, i was dreading the end and you drove it home, nice. :)
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/13/2020 10:06:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/23/2019 5:07:00 PM
this is sad.
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Date: 3/8/2019 10:16:00 PM
Indeed, we're all little pieces of a big picture.
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Date: 12/20/2018 4:59:00 AM
...maybe ... she's our earth, and all of us ... all the world's takers of her pieces ... and we cared not ... great thought yours, my unfamiliar flower ... cheers !!!!!!!!!!!
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/7/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/16/2018 6:27:00 AM
Very deep and emotive poetry...
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/16/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thank you

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