Pain Pills

When I take my pain relief pills
the pain slows down
But then
I forget
to take another one
because the pain slowed down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashford Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Well blow me down - never thought of that :-) Clever write!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 8:51 PM
Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Yup! Sounds about right. It’s an illusion!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 8:51 PM
It sure is
Adams Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 8:16 PM
heck I forget my meds half the time without taking pain pills... just think to take it, then can't remember if I actually took it when it crossed my mind... good one... hope you soon don't need them! hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 8:51 PM
I do not
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