Carson Jones Poet I do not know?

Pain Pain, Go Away

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           *                pain pain go away, why are you hear to stay?
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               *             my heart breaks. Your like a snake.
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                   *          my soul you will not take.
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Danesh Morgan July 26, 2013 at 12:24 AM close enough for me, hidden meaning to read, hidden message to see, just what are you saying? . . . . ha ha ha very sweet and nice thank you Carson Jones July 27, 2013 at 11:15 PM The poem is about the pain and heart break people go through, and the picture could be taken in as a tear on a cheek or as a rain drop on a building. Thanks for checking it out.

April Gabriella July 15, 2013 at 12:57 AM I really like this. It's short but speaks volumes. Nicely done!