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Pain of Separation

why nights without you
burn me like scorching coal fire
my beloved? love indeed

would you come back soon
to hold me passionately
that fast my aches end? Indeed



16 July 2021
Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Mystic Rose Rose

July 16, 2021 at 3:58 AM

would you teach me how to write one ?

Christuraj Alex

July 16, 2021 at 4:56 AM

I have just tried. I do not know whether this is what is expected by the sponsor. I am sure, you being a master poet can write far better than this.

Mystic Rose Rose

July 16, 2021 at 3:57 AM

not sure what a katuata is but you did this perfectly according to my heart :)

Christuraj Alex

July 16, 2021 at 11:19 AM

I just formed a concept with a question and tried to give the answer in the first stanza. And in the second stanza, I have tried to express the yearning of the beloved and have added the answer of the sweetheart. I do not know whether this is the correct method. I have just tried.

Pain of Separation

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