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Pain of Separation

why nights without you burn me like scorching coal fire my beloved? love indeed would you come back soon to hold me passionately that fast my aches end? Indeed 16 July 2021 Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/16/2021 3:58:00 AM

would you teach me how to write one ?

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/16/2021 4:56:00 AM

I have just tried. I do not know whether this is what is expected by the sponsor. I am sure, you being a master poet can write far better than this.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/16/2021 3:57:00 AM

not sure what a katuata is but you did this perfectly according to my heart :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/16/2021 11:19:00 AM

I just formed a concept with a question and tried to give the answer in the first stanza. And in the second stanza, I have tried to express the yearning of the beloved and have added the answer of the sweetheart. I do not know whether this is the correct method. I have just tried.