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Pain Never Leaves

Pain Never Leaves It screams out in agony when it goes unnoticed. It demands to be felt by everyone. No matter how much the body tries to reject the feeling, It crawls through the skin like a thousand bugs finding food. It comes to us by gushing out at the seams of our souls. It punctures the heart until it shatters in a million pieces. It demands to be felt. It doesn’t truly ever stop until other emotions are fully decayed. It spreads like a disease; memorising everything in its path. We let it consume us because we think we deserve its presents. It is like a guest who has ran out their welcome. It demands to be felt. It tricks the mind into never feeling anything else. It immobilizes the bodies of the so called weak. It is like the evil villain in stories that can’t be defeated. It is dark gloomy days with suffocating snowfall, lonely nights, and drowning thoughts. It screams out in agony and demands to be felt.

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Date: 3/28/2016 10:40:00 PM
Julianna Biswell, awesome to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 12/15/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hi Julianna, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:28:00 PM
JULIANNA, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:34:00 PM
An excelled description of pain at maximum height. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:05:00 PM
JULIANNA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/14/2015 8:15:00 PM
This is an intense write of feelings and pain, you are right never leaves it twists and turns and comes back again and you wrote that wonderfully .. Thanks for sharing
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