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Pain In Words

What are words called that cause Pain Suffering Heartbreak Anguish Words devoid of Passion Love Romance Warmth To become nothing Cold Detaching Avoidance Silent I am speechless in my thoughts Dark in my darkness alone I feel an emptiness in my soul I am without breath With one last gasp L o v e

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/21/2020 5:54:00 PM

Paul, this is a very well-written, formed piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. The design of the work is very interesting.

Paul Murray
Date: 11/21/2020 7:19:00 PM

Very kind words, thank you

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/21/2020 11:58:00 AM

When words circle the heart, it can leave you feeling so many emotions inside. "With one last gasp.. Love" And that is how it should be. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy

Paul Murray
Date: 11/21/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, I’m slow on words at the moment

Silent One

Date: 11/20/2020 5:18:00 AM

Deeply emotive

Paul Murray
Date: 11/20/2020 1:42:00 PM

Thank you Silent One Hope hangs by tightly woven heart strings