Pain In Words

What are words called that cause
Pain Suffering Heartbreak Anguish
Words devoid of
Passion Love Romance Warmth
To become nothing
Cold Detaching Avoidance Silent
I am speechless in my thoughts Dark in my darkness alone I feel an emptiness in my soul I am without breath With one last gasp L o v e
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hankins Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Paul, this is a very well-written, formed piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. The design of the work is very interesting.
Murray Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Very kind words, thank you
Nicole Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 11:58 AM
When words circle the heart, it can leave you feeling so many emotions inside. "With one last gasp.. Love" And that is how it should be. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
Murray Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Brandy, I’m slow on words at the moment
One Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 5:18 AM
Deeply emotive
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Silent One Hope hangs by tightly woven heart strings
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace