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Pain Dissolver

I took the magic pill of life - My gran and dad were 'live again; I woke next morning with my wife: The magic pill dissolved my pain. For Russell’s Pill of Life contest, 6th February

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 5/22/2013 8:20:00 PM

Jack wonderful, enjoyed this, short but sweet.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2013 1:55:00 PM

Jack, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/24/2013 10:11:00 AM

Many congratulations Jack xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/23/2013 8:16:00 PM

So sad Jack, well one ....Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 8:17:00 PM

Oops i lost my D .....sorry

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2013 4:12:00 AM

very sad Jack, yet excellent poetry...

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/7/2013 8:25:00 AM

sorry to hear about your wife jack! I like the idea of a pain dissolving pill - one that worked and you never had to take another pill again... good luck in the contest :)

Joy Wellington

Date: 2/6/2013 10:58:00 PM

Best wishes for the contest, Jack with this short but lively piece. One love, Joy Wells

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/6/2013 9:05:00 PM

Another very good entry for the contest, Jack...my best wishes for the Winners' List! Great job. Always, Annalise

Donna Jones

Date: 2/6/2013 6:00:00 PM

Very very nice. Good luck...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM

oh my, you put it personally and I think it is one of the BEST I have seen in his contest. So much better than my stupid sonnet I wrote. I hope it scores high, my friend and I hope you recover from the emotional pain. Luv, Andrea

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/6/2013 2:32:00 PM

very good poem - short and to the point!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2013 2:31:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work that is close to your heart..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 1:50:00 PM

I need this pain dissolverrr.. JK.. Jack, I know you mean well... always~ LINDA