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Pain Dissolver

I took the magic pill of life -
My gran and dad were 'live again;
I woke next morning with my wife:
The magic pill dissolved my pain.

For Russell’s Pill of Life contest, 6th February

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

May 22, 2013 at 8:20 PM

Jack wonderful, enjoyed this, short but sweet.

Poet Destroyer A

February 26, 2013 at 1:55 PM

Jack, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 24, 2013 at 10:11 AM

Many congratulations Jack xx

Seren Roberts

February 23, 2013 at 8:16 PM

So sad Jack, well one ....Seren

Seren Roberts

February 23, 2013 at 8:17 PM

Oops i lost my D .....sorry

Harry Horsman

February 9, 2013 at 4:12 AM

very sad Jack, yet excellent poetry...

Black Eyed Susan

February 7, 2013 at 8:25 AM

sorry to hear about your wife jack! I like the idea of a pain dissolving pill - one that worked and you never had to take another pill again... good luck in the contest :)

Joy Wellington

February 6, 2013 at 10:58 PM

Best wishes for the contest, Jack with this short but lively piece. One love, Joy Wells

Audrey Haick

February 6, 2013 at 9:05 PM

Another very good entry for the contest, Jack...my best wishes for the Winners' List! Great job. Always, Annalise

Donna Jones

February 6, 2013 at 6:00 PM

Very very nice. Good luck...

Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2013 at 3:23 PM

oh my, you put it personally and I think it is one of the BEST I have seen in his contest. So much better than my stupid sonnet I wrote. I hope it scores high, my friend and I hope you recover from the emotional pain. Luv, Andrea