Pain and Pleasure

Scorching sun threatens 
There you’re coming from the clouds
A pink umbrella
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April 28//2017
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Duncan Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Love a haiku :)
Gupta Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Sheer delight to see you in flight dear friend, Probir! A 7!
Gupta Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Thank you so much ...
Vaso Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 12:35 AM
Lovely Haiku, I admit, I might not get it, it makes one contemplate, I hope thats good! :)
Gupta Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 12:40 AM
I cannot but agree ... and do that most gladly ... thank you very much ...
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Great imagery in this succinct piece, Probir! Well done! 7+
Gupta Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Thank you White for the pink (!) enjoyment ...
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