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Scorching sun threatens There you’re coming from the clouds A pink umbrella _________________________________________ April 28//2017

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Date: 5/20/2017 9:48:00 PM
Love a haiku :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/23/2017 6:02:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/28/2017 7:34:00 AM
Sheer delight to see you in flight dear friend, Probir! A 7!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/29/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 4/28/2017 12:35:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, I admit, I might not get it, it makes one contemplate, I hope thats good! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2017 12:40:00 AM
I cannot but agree ... and do that most gladly ... thank you very much ...
Date: 4/28/2017 12:13:00 AM
Great imagery in this succinct piece, Probir! Well done! 7+
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you White for the pink (!) enjoyment ...

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