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Pain

Pain Here i am, stumbling into the unknown This void of darkness is closing in Having know idea where i am It steals the last wisp of light And hope... Tears flood like rivers from my eyes Soundlessly splashing onto the cold hard ground Cascading with my sorrow and pain I am alone There is no one here The cold is choking me It's large merciless hands hold me tight Should i just fade out? When i think about what happened My heart aches with uncontrollable pain If only i could turn back time I wouldn't be here now

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Date: 6/28/2017 2:37:00 AM
A very sad but beautifully written poem, remember all people do mistakes, don t let your past destroy your future, somebody told me that the past is dead but the future is bright, look ahead, I truly wish that God brings so much happiness in your life that you forgot all of your pzins however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:24:00 AM
Remarkable poem! These lines are golden and graceful: "When i think about what happened My heart aches with uncontrollable pain If only i could turn back time I wouldn't be here now" Thanks for writing such epic and great poems.
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Date: 3/29/2016 2:07:00 AM
Great write.. Magan
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