Pain

Sometimes you must Hurt in order to know, Fall in order to grow, Lose in order to gain Because life's greatest lessons are learned through Pain For those who have the will to never give up

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Black Matta

Date: 9/26/2015 3:56:00 AM

Thank you, Mohammed. I also have the same problem and that's why I prefer to choose (I don't know) as a category. I noticed many poets who choose the wrong category, but still their poems are wonderful.

Black Matta

Date: 9/24/2015 5:18:00 PM

Mohammed, I like your way of how you end your poems (for...). But I can't understand why you chose this form "name". I didn't find that the definition matches your poem. Please, explain it for me. Thank you! Blackmatta

Mohammed Azim
Date: 9/25/2015 2:04:00 PM

I don't relay know what form is allocated to each poem. So I chose this in the category of "name" because in my mind (I still do) I thought "name" is the category in which the reader gets to decide what category the poem is in; interacting with the reader which is something I have pleasantly experienced in the sporting world.