Pain

pain so sharp
it takes my breath away!
pain so fierce
it feels like a thousand tiny needles
all trying to pierce
my still beating heart.
pain so furious
it knocks me to the ground!
pain so ferocious
i spend every day
fearing the next round.
when the pain strikes
do not touch me,
do not counsel me.
when the pain strikes
all you can do is watch.
as i writhe in pain
and wonder if my eighteen years
have been in vain!
when the pain strikes
i think of past regrets,
and all my unpayed debts.
when the pain strikes
i remember ten dollars owed,
for a couple of books.
when the pain strikes
i see the faces
of all my old friends!
i see all the ones i've hurt.
all the ones i've left!
when i feel,
that icy blade of pain,
as it cuts open my chest,
searching for my heart,
i think of my family,
and  howi've let them down!
as these thoughts flood my mind,
while i writhe in pain,
i can't help wondering,
"is my life spent in vain?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 28, 2013 at 5:41 PM
James, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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April 28, 2013 at 6:51 PM
what do you mean featured poem of the week?
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April 19, 2013 at 10:34 PM
:-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup, James. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"
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April 20, 2013 at 12:10 PM
Thank you. and I'll keep that in mind! XD
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 10:09 PM
You write with sorrow and negativity .... however I like it, cause the pain you speak of is deep, and you sure cut the images of hurt, and the ones you left behind to flood in your mind..... a good verse... i enjoyed the poem... Linda
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April 20, 2013 at 12:12 PM
thank you. and to be a hundred percent honest... this poem isn't metaphorical. its actually about my chest pains.
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April 19, 2013 at 10:00 PM
James, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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April 20, 2013 at 12:12 PM
7 wonders? what's that?
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