Pain

It hurts so deeply, My heart feels shattered, I want to be there , to my love it dont matter. They always get their way, I wished she could see, Its them being judgemental , She claims its me. I thought when your as one, You stand firm by their side, Not this relationship, Oh what a surprise. The feeling of poison, run through my veins. The feeling I feel is nothing but pain.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/27/2013 12:12:00 AM

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 3/27/2013 12:24:00 AM

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