Pain 1

pain is what i get for not being a certain way.
pain is what i feel for not doing it that way.
pains is what i see even though its hard to tell, pain is all i have each and every day. 
I feel the intensity, a stinging sensation running across my cheek. The sudden pain goes 
through me and my body goes weak.
Pain, pain, and even more pain greets me at the door. 
I get tired of it knocking,scratching, and yelling. I just can't take it anymore. Pain is what i 
get even though i try my best. Pain is what i feel piercing my ears as he compares me to the 
rest. Pain is i get but will he win in the end? Pain, i want him to feel it to for i was more than 
a girlfriend.
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July 28, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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July 27, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Marocka, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
Nutter Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 2:31 AM
I relate to this magnificient piece also. Abuse come in many forms, and he will only win in the end if you allow him to. I hope he also feels the pain he has brought upon you, to be honest it sounds like you would be better to walk away. I wrote a couple of poems you might want to read titled "Pain" and No Cure" Keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Sullivan Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 11:41 PM
wow this is amazing great job I can relateto it in so many ways
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