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Pain

The pain some feel from misery, is not good The pain some feel from ill treatment, Will hurt The pain some feel from abuse, Is not pleasant The pain some feel from jealousness, Is disturbing The pain some feel from greed, Is dangerous The pain some feel from violence, Is painful The pain some feel from words, Can be strong The pain some feel from want, Overcomes what is there The pain some feel from bad thoughts, Put away the good thoughts The pain some feel from their heart, Will hurt and twist your actions around, twist your feelings, And even hurt the outside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 1/31/2012 12:52:00 AM
Wow! It spirals. Well thought out poem. I have always liked the repeating lined poems. This line is very haunting. Very true. And it cuts so deep when you read it. Amazing job! Keep writting!
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