Pain

I bite you for a second
your bruised for a lifetime
i give you a quick slap
the hurt in your arm never ceases

you say I'm brutal
i wont deny it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 11:02 AM
Words flow if it's just an ordinary poem. Excuse me... if you really bite the loved ones please contact Kyra's show to find you solutions. I wish you all the best and am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:08 AM
Hummmm. Very interesting. Are you the burtal one in this metaphor? Or is it a metaphor? It is definitely a captivating poem that sends one wondering... And thinking abut abuse. Well written. It has served a purpose. Love, Dane
Kroeger Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 9:50 PM
um.... whats it mean.?
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