Pain

When will it stop
Can I feel well and great
All I see is a red drop
When will it stop tearing me apart
Ruining me , breaking me down
Not even letting me get off the line and start
Am i ever going to be free
From this hell and sorrow
I never want to hear the letter P
God, why are you doing this
What did I do 
To deserve all this painness
Want to be forgiven
Get along with life 
And still be breathen
Please I dont want to break
I want to get along
I promise I will remember what's at stake
Wish this not on anyone
Because before you know it
You and your heart will be done
I never want to got through pain
because it drags along with you, leaves a great big stain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/19/2009 4:43:00 PM
This really exudes a lot of pain and hurt....may your pen never run dry....Love and Light...LaBella
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:05:00 AM
Stake not steak lol you spelled the food....also awesome, i know this totally, now i wish i hadnt took down all my other poems so you could read some if you wanted...well their in my blog on myspace...
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Date: 4/7/2009 3:09:00 PM
Jordan God reads your heart cast all your cares on Him because He loves you and you are very special. My wife suffers from an illness that leaves her in a lot of pain but as she nears the Lord He helps her to cope with it. Also if you ask God to forgive you He will and its all gone, just start thanking Him. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:18:00 PM
Not to bash, but Seriously? I know poems don't HAVE to rhyme, but when they do, at least have them rhyme on the same syllable. And the rhymes are very elementary. Also, how many poems are titled PAIN? Like the title, the rest of the poem is not very creative. I would read the "What is good poetry?" link under resources.What I'm trying to say is, some poems you write to vent and then keep to yourself. Because how many people want to read another emo poem titled PAIN? Good luck with the next one
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