Pain

I want you to train
And train again
Till at last
You gain;
I want you to complain
In times
Of pain,
But remember
Stay sane
And gather up gain
Your vital source
Your grain;
Such is my advice
To you;
Over and again
Advice again and again
Need I clearly explain
In your mind
In your brain
Lie the solutions
To the depths of your pain?
No matter how severe
The pain Stay calm
And refrain
From life’s problems
From life’s chain.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/23/2023 3:23:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 12/9/2020 6:39:00 PM

Looking forward to more by you...check out the contests too. They’re a lot of fun, and are great challenges to try new forms.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 10/9/2020 11:02:00 PM

I like the rhyme and rhythm of this! It has good advice in it, too.

Jillani Birech
Date: 10/10/2020 12:19:00 PM

Thank you so much!