Paddles On Lake

Lake
s p o u t s
wavelets
Paddles
c o l l e c t
moss



Contest: Just A Few Words, Joseph May
29 Oct 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Juaneco, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 4:02 PM
good imagery, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Nicely penned Juaneco, Congrats on your HM
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Hi Juaneco, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Nice Juaneco :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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October 31, 2020 at 11:48 AM
- Congratulations on your poem, Juaneco :) - // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Hello Juaneco Torrente, you made me feel like i was on the lake in the boat. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my frind.
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October 30, 2020 at 9:59 AM
You did this very well..
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