Packed With Love-Vision

As I gaze at my gorgeous lunch salad
sings to me a sonorous love ballad!
What’s dazzling about temporal food
that calls for this surreal mood?
The melting silk of shredded cheese,
the sharp crunch of leafy lettuce,
the crimson of tomatoes. All hold a spot arcane
tucked behind the corridors mundane,
oft murmurous with banal ‘I-love-you’,
jewels, roses and boxed rocks so blue.
The quiet gesture of you packing my meal
with thoughtfulness and honest zeal
makes my heart quiver with glee.
Your love sprinkled in the foliage medley
don’t know if any eye can see.

Written 04/28/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 29, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Sara, a wonderful poem... LINDA
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April 29, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for the encouragement Linda!
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April 28, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Interesting poem, Sara. Well scripted. Barry
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April 29, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Barry!
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