Packages of Love
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Seguidilla, a brief form with Spanish origin. It has 7 lines - with a syllable count of 7- 5- 7- 5- 5- 7- 5 . Line 2 rhymes with Line 4, and line 5 rhymes with line 7, thus…x, A, x, A, B, x, B
Wrapped with God's bountiful love*
Mom's gift exudes grace
Dad carries puppy inside
Revealing champ's face
Sis brings mirth-filled toy
For special child's milestone day
Packed to spark blest joy.
*Romans 8:38-39 For I am persuaded, that neither death, nor life, nor angels, nor principalities, nor powers, nor things present, nor things to come, Nor height, nor depth, nor any other creature, shall be able to separate us from the love of God, which is in Christ Jesus our Lord.
August 19, 2025
2nd place, "FAVORITE THINGS" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 8/27/2025
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