Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Free verse

Pack Hunters

Like a pack of wolves 
shredding the flesh of their kill,
The pack of priests 
tears my soul apart.



~Abdul Malik / 12/19/15 / words: 19
~Something with great impact contest by nette onclaud

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Teddy Kimathi December 23, 2015 at 3:43 AM There is a two-case scenario here....either the priests are exorcising or the priests are up to no good.... Congrats for your placement in the contest, Abdul! ;-)

Paul Callus December 20, 2015 at 4:03 PM Written with strong emotions, indeed, Abdul. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul Abdul Malik Mandani December 21, 2015 at 9:59 AM Thanks Paul, appreciate your comments.

Faye Gibson December 20, 2015 at 11:17 AM Wow! Powerful writing with great impact. Congratulations. Abdul Malik Mandani December 21, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks Faye, I have been fighting 'packs' of all sorts all my life.

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:00 AM nice win

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2015 at 5:56 AM this is great, emotive stuff, abdul.. sweet congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs" Abdul Malik Mandani December 21, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks nette, for your stamp of approval!