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Pack Hunters

Like a pack of wolves shredding the flesh of their kill, The pack of priests tears my soul apart.
~Abdul Malik / 12/19/15 / words: 19 ~Something with great impact contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 12/23/2015 3:43:00 AM
There is a two-case scenario here....either the priests are exorcising or the priests are up to no good.... Congrats for your placement in the contest, Abdul! ;-)
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Date: 12/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
Written with strong emotions, indeed, Abdul. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/21/2015 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Paul, appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/20/2015 11:17:00 AM
Wow! Powerful writing with great impact. Congratulations.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/21/2015 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Faye, I have been fighting 'packs' of all sorts all my life.
Date: 12/20/2015 11:00:00 AM
nice win
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:56:00 AM
this is great, emotive stuff, abdul.. sweet congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/21/2015 10:01:00 AM
Thanks nette, for your stamp of approval!

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