Debra Squyres Poet Kimo

Pacing Seasons

 Burnished copper leaves pace butterfly’s wings
as young maiden, pink dressed, leans
dreading harsh winter’s bark

© Debra Squyres  
2/16/15

Written for: In Praise of Kimo –Using visual 1
Sponsor:  Nette Onclaude 

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Seren Roberts March 20, 2015 at 2:28 AM Loved it Debra, congrats....Seren

Casarah Nance March 13, 2015 at 4:08 PM an interesting collection of descriptions, grats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2015 at 2:04 PM Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love

Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 10:59 AM Debra, congratulations on your nice win! I enjoyed your poetic interpretation of the visual. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 7:45 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2015 at 12:36 AM Descriptive lines, Debra. I especially like the sound of line one!

John Lawless February 16, 2015 at 5:19 PM Debra you had me at "harsh winter's bark" I like it, hope it does well in the contest. Debra Squyres February 17, 2015 at 6:56 AM Thank you, John !!

Emile Pinet February 16, 2015 at 1:16 PM Good word choices moving the reader with their beauty and imagery. Emile #7 Debra Squyres February 17, 2015 at 6:56 AM Thank you, Emile!!

Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 12:08 PM Absolutely delightful Debra good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Debra Squyres February 16, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thank you, hugs !! xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2015 at 11:40 AM - A gem, dear Debra! (7) - I wish you best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Debra Squyres February 16, 2015 at 12:16 PM Thank you !! :) hugs !! xx