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Pacified Plunger

Pacified Plunger (Image 3) Suck it up Hype Pacify your need The Needle Pacify your greed Point taken Give me my Binky The nipple of thirst Diluted Water Dehydrated Curse Entered Skin Slowly back out Deep breathe allowed Motionless Mannequin Addictions crowd Death Feeds Suck it up again Pacify your need Never-ending Needle Pinpricked Bleed Stop! Please Stop! 04/07/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 9:40:00 PM

Hi Brian, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~

Brian Davey
Date: 4/28/2016 3:40:00 AM

thank you Linda it is always a pleasure having you on my board!

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/15/2016 9:47:00 AM

Concisely penned descriptive verse, quite well written, congratulations!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/16/2016 6:35:00 AM

Thank you very much Dineen I am glad that you enjoyed my write

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/14/2016 9:48:00 PM

Thought provoking write, Brian. Congrats on your win!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:11:00 AM

Thank you Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:19:00 PM

this is VERY good work. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:11:00 AM

I am honored you thought highly of this poem, I appreciate it very much

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/14/2016 6:14:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win in Silent One's contest, Brian. Sandra

Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:10:00 AM

Thank you again Sandra you're the best

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/14/2016 5:53:00 PM

Congratulations Brian on your placement in the contest. Addiction is such a blight on society. It does not discriminate. Peace my friend:)

Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:10:00 AM

So true my friend and it is running rampant with our youth out here in California as of late

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/10/2016 9:56:00 PM

Very powerfully stated with devasting and heartbreaking imagery, Brian! Best wishes for the contest! Sandra

Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Sandra It is a devastating disease

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/9/2016 10:30:00 PM

This poem was so conflicting with itself ... much like the drugs are. Quite the disturbing phrases like "Motionless Mannequin", until the dark climax ... "Stop! Please Stop!" ... I've never became acquainted them myself, but have been around people that have ... it's not a pretty thing to witness! Awesome job on this one.

Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 12:40:00 AM

Thank you Timothy and thank God you have never been acquainted with them, unfortunately growing up in a Southern California Beach Community they run rampant and it is a sad state of affairs. They now nicknamed my highschool Heroin High, crazy it is

Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2016 9:17:00 AM

Brian, wow what an incredible write, oh the horror of addiction is so well presented in your poem, 7 ~

Brian Davey
Date: 4/8/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Constance it is a horrible disease and unfortunately I have witnessed the horrors all too well here in Southern California.