Pacific Wrens

In foggy north coasts
comes bright flecks from speckled calls~
of pacific wrens

8/13/21
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Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Wrens and sparrows do have some beautiful colors when seen up close like with binoculars. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Zahid Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 10:54 AM
I like it... Beautiful imagery here... Well penned
Watt Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Written by one who knows the foggy north coast... I like the proximity of the words flecks and speckled. Beautifully crafted.
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:37 PM
That's exactly why I wrote them, clever catch :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
Daniel Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 2:12 AM
Oh wow! I love those "speckled calls", great haiku, Michelle:)
Fenn Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Makes me long for the coast so I can hear them! Good luck in the contest!
Cunningham Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Not familiar with the Pacific Wren, but love to see any birds in flight. Do you live by the coast Michelle? Tom
Leffanta Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Probably cooing, "Fire! Fire!" Good luck in the contest!
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