Oye, Latin

There I stood, flushed: gripping a diaphanous pelvis of his guitar, he rips a pulpy drool of velvet notes… glossy under a roulette of lights, saucy on the parquet floor upon an artist's feet :his body movement resembling a twisted weave; the bossa nova of high timbre frothing scales of primitive jungle moans, while Latin hands roll with dizzy Carribean beats as if Santana and Jobim grooved with him. Oh he aches, shakes like a livid soul, more ravished than refined in his groping music, my night's balm. Streams of ‘Oye Como Va’ entice a trance rippling down my spine, ready to tug with the accompaniment of drums and sax; till the last rhapsodic groan prolongs a dazed jiggle for hips to leap unto the heat of the sky. My flesh perspires as I whirl, unmindful of the exotic rhythm prancing like a black magic woman! ------- 10/17/2015 Trashed Poem #3 Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings By nette onclaud

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Date: 11/10/2015 7:43:00 PM
Both ravishing and refined Nette...this is the cream of any contest...thanks for stopping by today :)
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:18:00 PM
Hey Nette, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the Trashed #3 contest! Maybe whoever judged it before has no idea what these passion filled songs are (Santana-my all time favorite). I am so glad BW saw the excellence in your poem. A well deserved win! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:22:00 PM
Brilliant imagery Nette you sure had me dancing with this clever write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:29:00 PM
Where can I get this album......WOW....this has got to be the most sensuous ode to a guitar ever written......
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:05:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:47:00 AM
Saucy poem with that rhythmic beat.. very latino indeed; hot, hot!
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:12:00 PM
This is great nette. Love the song and images.
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:55:00 AM
wowowowow, you used such stunning imagery. I expect to see this one fly to the top of the list. And the allusion to the black magic woman song at the bottom. Genius!
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:54:00 AM
Now you made me feel this Nette..Dancing with the latino boy...Oh I can really picture this..Fantastic and unique way of writing...A fav.
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:53:00 AM
Oh wow...this beats with the spirit of Latin music! I too love bossa nova, Nette. Started when I heard Girl From Ipanema. Also have Sitti CDs. It's good I saw this first before I even tried to write...haha. Seriously, I love your take on the theme. Now, I'll have to try another of my fav music, or not at all...:-))) huggs!
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