Oye, Latin

There I stood, flushed: gripping a diaphanous pelvis of his guitar, he rips a pulpy drool of velvet notes… glossy under a roulette of lights, saucy on the parquet floor upon an artist's feet :his body movement resembling a twisted weave; the bossa nova of high timbre frothing scales of primitive jungle moans, while Latin hands roll with dizzy Carribean beats as if Santana and Jobim grooved with him. Oh he aches, shakes like a livid soul, more ravished than refined in his groping music, my night's balm. Streams of ‘Oye Como Va’ entice a trance rippling down my spine, ready to tug with the accompaniment of drums and sax; till the last rhapsodic groan prolongs a dazed jiggle for hips to leap unto the heat of the sky. My flesh perspires as I whirl, unmindful of the exotic rhythm prancing like a black magic woman! ------- 10/17/2015 Trashed Poem #3 Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings By nette onclaud
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Mohn Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 7:43 PM
Both ravishing and refined Nette...this is the cream of any contest...thanks for stopping by today :)
Romaine Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Hey Nette, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the Trashed #3 contest! Maybe whoever judged it before has no idea what these passion filled songs are (Santana-my all time favorite). I am so glad BW saw the excellence in your poem. A well deserved win! Be Blessed, Neva
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Brilliant imagery Nette you sure had me dancing with this clever write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Where can I get this album......WOW....this has got to be the most sensuous ode to a guitar ever written......
A  Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
Lalion Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Saucy poem with that rhythmic beat.. very latino indeed; hot, hot!
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 2:12 PM
This is great nette. Love the song and images.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:55 AM
wowowowow, you used such stunning imagery. I expect to see this one fly to the top of the list. And the allusion to the black magic woman song at the bottom. Genius!
Chircop Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Now you made me feel this Nette..Dancing with the latino boy...Oh I can really picture this..Fantastic and unique way of writing...A fav.
Nunez Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Oh wow...this beats with the spirit of Latin music! I too love bossa nova, Nette. Started when I heard Girl From Ipanema. Also have Sitti CDs. It's good I saw this first before I even tried to write...haha. Seriously, I love your take on the theme. Now, I'll have to try another of my fav music, or not at all...:-))) huggs!
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