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Oy Vey

the joy of a toy twirly, squishy, bounce, bounce the toy joy better than a boy or a boy toy or a cat nip toy shiny, squeaky, bounce pounce a girls toy how sweet, a sweet to eat, eat and what will the poor thing do then the joy toy oy a tribute to a pisher e.e. cummings

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Date: 5/4/2009 4:48:00 PM
This is so cute!
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:20:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:10:00 PM
e.e cummings, such a wonderful artist of writing. a man who wrote on toilet papers, is now a legendary writer. who would have known... love the style in this poem, also the rhyming too. fantastic deborah. love sami.
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:43:00 PM
Great internal and external rhyme, Deborah. Indeed, sometimes toys bring more joy than boys. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:21:00 AM
A funny write with a new perspective of the man's write through pop culture ... where he spend his best energies ... funny, revealing, and i love it.
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:31:00 AM
Unbelievable Deborah,...Sharon got to you first on this one, I had to peek in on this write,..oy vey,..I loved it! TY james
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:38:00 AM
OMG you are too much. The title drew me in, but I had to look up pisher and when I did I laughed!!! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:23:00 AM
this was so good
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Date: 4/22/2009 11:50:00 PM
Great luck in the contest Deborah! Great writing as always! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:22:00 PM
Oy, now I'm all verklempt. LOL ***Danielle***
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Date: 4/22/2009 4:05:00 PM
one of my favorite poets. john
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Date: 4/22/2009 3:29:00 PM
very nice indeed,nice and sweet my friend----charma
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Date: 4/22/2009 2:55:00 PM
Nice tribute, I like the word play, best of luck in the contest...Raul
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