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Oxymoronica

OXYMORONICA 


In the heat of a midwinter’s day,
4 beautifully ugly geese came to lay
They felt alone in the crowd, 
Because others were silently loud,
And they kept their mouths wide shut; there they restlessly stayed.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2011 at 7:52 AM Congratulations Alan on your win in Kristen Bruni's contest "Oxymoronica". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit February 9, 2011 at 4:36 PM Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is almost a limerick. The last line is just a bit too long.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2011 at 2:49 PM Congrats Alan on your big win in Kristen's contest with this terrific write and entry luv.. enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta February 1, 2011 at 4:33 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Alan

Duncan Chappell January 24, 2011 at 5:01 PM excellent my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2011 at 5:12 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. there is a contest with the same title as your poem .. hope u enter and good luck ... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown January 24, 2011 at 3:35 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alan. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker January 23, 2011 at 5:34 PM Nice contrasting language in every line! Well crafted!