Oxygen

A bubble of air,
Reaches the surface and bursts:
Underwater life.

naturehaiku

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Sharon Winter

July 8, 2009 at 5:53 AM

Raul, this is awesome. Wrote you back, Shar

Valerie Bellefleur

July 3, 2009 at 7:20 PM

wonderfully expressed - again says so much of the vast rich life beneath the ocean..

Carrie Richards

July 1, 2009 at 11:00 AM

You have the ability to capture so many little things in nature with your haiku poetry...things we often take for granted. Your keen eye is always on the lookout. :) Another fine example, Raul !