Oxygen

A bubble of air, Reaches the surface and bursts: Underwater life.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 7/8/2009 5:53:00 AM

Raul, this is awesome. Wrote you back, Shar

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 7/3/2009 7:20:00 PM

wonderfully expressed - again says so much of the vast rich life beneath the ocean..

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/1/2009 11:00:00 AM

You have the ability to capture so many little things in nature with your haiku poetry...things we often take for granted. Your keen eye is always on the lookout. :) Another fine example, Raul !

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2009 10:54:00 AM

Clever Haiku Raul>>James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/1/2009 6:47:00 AM

i need oxygen,im underwater,im dead-you are "the king",i agree with Rub--great write as always--charma

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/30/2009 10:48:00 PM

O2 good , Raul ..... Far, too good ....

Laurie Ginn

Date: 6/30/2009 10:37:00 PM

Pure and simple, life's most valuable gifts